Nazi Script
Admittedly, I don't know a lot about screenwriting; that may show in my commentary. But who doesn't appreciate a good little-girl-sees-Nazis screenplay? These are the first six pages.
Labels: script
posted by AHFB at 11:14 PM
7 Comments:
This isn't quite ready for LightWorks - no one has been raped yet!
omg. best commentary yet.
though, of course, the material you were working with was top-notch.
i loved the shrinking bed comic! the more drawings you include the better! :)
It's like a deranged Teen Girl Squad or something.
hmmm...you might be onto something there, Mike...
"Teen Girl Squad! Der Fuhrer! Was-Ist-Seine-Name! Geschwaderkommodore! The Ugly One!"
I like the "abrasive" orange color.
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And "slightly obese"?!
According to the American Heritage Dictionary:
o·bese (½-b¶s“) adj. Extremely fat; grossly overweight.
How can this woman be slightly extremely fat?
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This is just utter crap.
I knew if I was on this site long enough, I'd find something that was mine! I left way too many things in the printer last year.
Rough draft for a later script that was eventually a short movie. Can't disagree with the comments, though. Keep up the good work.
- Maggie, Author.
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