Sunday, October 01, 2006

Nazi Script

Admittedly, I don't know a lot about screenwriting; that may show in my commentary. But who doesn't appreciate a good little-girl-sees-Nazis screenplay? These are the first six pages.

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Blogger Little Max said...

This isn't quite ready for LightWorks - no one has been raped yet!

9:11 AM  
Anonymous heidi said...

omg. best commentary yet.

though, of course, the material you were working with was top-notch.

2:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i loved the shrinking bed comic! the more drawings you include the better! :)

8:02 PM  
Anonymous Mike said...

It's like a deranged Teen Girl Squad or something.

11:40 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said... might be onto something there, Mike...

"Teen Girl Squad! Der Fuhrer! Was-Ist-Seine-Name! Geschwaderkommodore! The Ugly One!"

9:07 AM  
Blogger Katherine said...

I like the "abrasive" orange color.
And "slightly obese"?!
According to the American Heritage Dictionary:
o·bese (½-b¶s“) adj. Extremely fat; grossly overweight.

How can this woman be slightly extremely fat?
This is just utter crap.

5:03 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I knew if I was on this site long enough, I'd find something that was mine! I left way too many things in the printer last year.

Rough draft for a later script that was eventually a short movie. Can't disagree with the comments, though. Keep up the good work.

- Maggie, Author.

2:22 PM  

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