Sunday, July 01, 2007

Let's Randomly String Sentences Together

So bad I don't even know what to do with myself. I can't believe some of the mistakes in here: rough draft or not.

The goggles they do nothing

Has anyone read Mama Day? Does this paper make even a little bit of sense?


Anonymous Anonymous said...

I have not read Mama Day, but the paper makes complete sense. Once you embrace the past and tie it to the present and the future you can overcome the hurricane of slavery and love will conquer all.

11:14 PM  
Blogger AHFB said...

^I'm not sure if the above post is supposed to be serious or not, so I'll just address it as if it were serious and look dumb if it isn't.

Mostly I'm talking about those sentences like
"Cocoa's life was so different at home that did not get much about it, why 'there was nothing encouraging to linger' (5?)"

Also, I just realized that sometimes Author writes "Coca" and sometimes writes "Cocoa"

Anyhow this paper is bogged down with too many ideas: opposites attract, cultural divides, love. While it seems like these ideas clearly are related in the story, they are in no way tied together in this paper: at least not well and not with proper sentences.

11:34 PM  
Blogger Lilly said...

...and here I was hoping that anonymous just had a dry sense of humour better suited to the spoken word.

4:25 AM  
Blogger Katherine said...

I loved the comic of the African American man snuggling his "remember".

I've read essays written by high school seniors that were better than this one.

Who is Mama Day? The author refuses to introduce her to us.

This was a painful read.

8:48 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Anonymous DID have a dry sense of humour better suited to the spoken word. I just thought it sounded so ridiculous everyone would realize...

9:19 AM  
Blogger The Second Sixty-Eight said...

That was funny as hell.

12:52 AM  
Blogger Canadian Canuck said...

Maybe tomorrow, it'll make some more sense, but damn it, how can someone write so terribly?

I think it's a first draft because of the quotation "(put food mock quote here)" which is not something I'd like in a finished "essay"?

3:39 AM  
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12:57 AM  
Anonymous Klumpig said...

Maybe the author's constant switching of verb tense has something to do with his point of bringing the past, present, and future together!


8:49 AM  
Blogger AJ Chase said...

Oohh, that is deep...

7:47 PM  
Blogger Katherine said...

Kind of reminiscent of "Pineapple No Backspace."

8:42 PM  
Anonymous mp said...

My eyes are bleeding.

5:48 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Blogging can open your mind

10:52 PM  
Blogger whit said...

I'm a little behind reading this blog, so here are my comments. Better late than never.

I think the thing that made me laugh most is where the author had a badly placed semicolon and you just circled it and had a little tiny "no". I don't know if it was tiny on purpose, but for some reason the size of the word no made me laugh hysterically.

In other news, i haven't heard from you in a long time ahfb!

11:23 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

it's GLORIA Naylor. Not Glory.

9:36 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I hope this person is some sort of science or math major. If not, UofM let a total idiot slip through the admissions cracks.

4:12 PM  
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my favorite is the inversion

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