Labels: analysis, essay, freshman
posted by AHFB at 12:05 PM
My mom would say to author: "Don't break your arm patting yourself on the back"
I feel like the first five sentences are all rearranged versions of each other.Oh, and shit. They're all space-filling shit.
The whole thing exists to fill space--especially that last sentence. It's pretty obvious that Author was just like "crap, I'm two lines away: what's something else I can talk about"On the bright side of things, I'm glad the Making the Paper story showed up here rather than in the actual paper itself (which I don't have). All too often people spend the first paragraph spinning their wheels talking about the process that they used when thinking about the assigned subject.
I love the assignments where I am meant to talk about my intellectual gifts, abilities, and overall greatness. They're my favorite.
"check facebook" ha... -shudder- Reflective analysis... reminds me of ENG 125... that was horrible.
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