Cletus (pages 8-12)
I'm not sure about how I feel about how satisfying the ending is or isn't. Maybe I'm just too scared that the conclusion of this paper shows clear signs of revision.
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posted by AHFB at 2:55 AM
12 Comments:
I loooved the drawing of the mother! It cracked me up. Also "200 dollars of nachos please" - haha, that is totally ridiculous.
Oh, ouch. Terrible, terrible, terrible. Spiderman 4 is sooooo gonna suck. Oh noes.
man, at first i thought that it was a flash forward thing to twenty years in the future, with cletus still living with his mother and buying her nachos because he couldn't go to college... and robert e. lee foster had grown up to become postman...
i like my idea better than the revision...
I think you typo-ed the title of this post... but I like it.
"Cleat-us" ... like he's a soccer player or something.
fixed. thanks
hahaha cleat us, cause he kicked the guy... get it?
i don't think i get it. i am sure that i am not going to try.
I want to hear more of Cletus's exciting adventures!
What a ridiculous story.. :p
i loled at the ending comic
please can we make this into a movie? you can be cletus. i'll be the fat ma. joel can be robert e lee.
Cletus...that one simple word says it ALL! Speak no further! Cletus' story reminds me of where I teach (which reminds me of Springfield from the Simpons)...that scares me...your comments are hilarious! Thanks for the laughs.
different and interesting, keep it up, i'll come back to visit again soon...erik
Can I just say that I love your blog. I laughed so hard that I was literally crying. And this is potentially the worst story ever written and I've read some really, really bad stories.
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