Sunday, May 13, 2007

Cletus (pages 8-12)

I'm not sure about how I feel about how satisfying the ending is or isn't. Maybe I'm just too scared that the conclusion of this paper shows clear signs of revision.
cletus southern stereotypes

suthern sterotypes yall


Anonymous Anonymous said...

I loooved the drawing of the mother! It cracked me up. Also "200 dollars of nachos please" - haha, that is totally ridiculous.

11:04 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh, ouch. Terrible, terrible, terrible. Spiderman 4 is sooooo gonna suck. Oh noes.

12:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

man, at first i thought that it was a flash forward thing to twenty years in the future, with cletus still living with his mother and buying her nachos because he couldn't go to college... and robert e. lee foster had grown up to become postman...

i like my idea better than the revision...

4:46 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think you typo-ed the title of this post... but I like it.

"Cleat-us" ... like he's a soccer player or something.

6:41 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

fixed. thanks

6:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hahaha cleat us, cause he kicked the guy... get it?

8:21 PM  
Blogger whit said...

i don't think i get it. i am sure that i am not going to try.

3:14 PM  
Blogger Irisi said...

I want to hear more of Cletus's exciting adventures!

What a ridiculous story.. :p

7:49 PM  
Anonymous k said...

i loled at the ending comic

please can we make this into a movie? you can be cletus. i'll be the fat ma. joel can be robert e lee.

11:39 PM  
Blogger vixen1975 said...

Cletus...that one simple word says it ALL! Speak no further! Cletus' story reminds me of where I teach (which reminds me of Springfield from the Simpons)...that scares me...your comments are hilarious! Thanks for the laughs.

11:44 PM  
Blogger Erik Mann said...

different and interesting, keep it up, i'll come back to visit again soon...erik

11:59 AM  
Blogger AJ Chase said...

Can I just say that I love your blog. I laughed so hard that I was literally crying. And this is potentially the worst story ever written and I've read some really, really bad stories.

2:43 AM  

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