Misleading Mayo (completed WYOs)

Yeah, remember long ago when I uploaded a paper and invited you to make your own comments and scan them? I finally got a chance to try my hand at combining them. Unfortunately, due to the scans, they didn't combine so well, so I'm just posting the both of them here for you to read in case you haven't already.

#1 by Poly-C


#2 by Rems